To explain, my weakness in style errors is found in all my essays: "Cause and Effect of Technology and Globalization", "Consultants financials in today's workplace" and "Too Much Government Spending? The instructor's analysis of all three essays addresses the following style errors which consist of sentence fragments, pronoun reference, parallel structure, coordinating and unnecessary words (“Cause and effect…” 1-5; “Financial advisors…” 1-5; “Too many expenses…” 1-5). Another example of what I wrote from the essay “Cause and effect of technology and globalization” is a sentence fragment, “That is, employers are looking for graduates…” Correcting the sentence fragment and revising the sentence appear here changing the sentence fragment from “that” to “In other words” (“Cause and effect…” 3). Another weakness in my writing is the use of unnecessary words. An example of this is "...employers require their new employees to acquire a position...", and the unnecessary word is "acquire", and the phrase is not necessary for the sentence or could be expressed more concisely ("Financial Consultants..." 1). These examples show how I have weaknesses in my writing style. Undoubtedly, being able to use the style is crucial because it exemplifies the tone and professionalism in my writing can improve an opinion about my essay.For this reason I want to get the appropriate writing style as one of my own